KH- Heartless Wyvern

...It is a Wyvern Emblem Heartless... I must critique it.

To keep it simple:

Likes:

1.I think the colors came out very vibrantly.

2. The pose is very impressive. He looks as if he is about to attack something, which is pretty accurate to the heartless.

3.The overall drawing is very accurate to the actual wyvern heartless.

4. The background color provides some nice contrast without looking too crazy.

Things to consider:

1. I know this might be hard to do, but consider shading around the belly and legs to give it more life and depth. Oh, in fact, just try shading all the nooks and crannies of the wings too.

Other than that it is really good.

Vision: 4, because I see that you were willing to draw this again.

Originality: 3, because this is a wyvern heartless... and it looks like a normal wyvern heartless. What I mean is, I think it is lovely, but I feel it could have been transformed into something more creative---maybe if you put it in a strange setting or made it do something funny it would be more original, you know? Of course, I like how this is because it is more accurate to the actual heartless.

Technique: 4, because this is very well done, it just needs some shading.

Impact: 4.5 because I want to say to myself, "Oh no, please not this heartless, I do not want to fight it," but I also like looking at it because it is THAT heartless. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/>

Overall, awesome work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="262" title="Thumbs Up"/>

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